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Tiny Model Airplanes
  4th/231   Σ28.919   Aug 3rd 2013 2:26pm
2A03 + Namco 163 (5 Channels) Tracked in Famitracker.
Gretsch/Rogers/Remo drums.
Minimoog lead from NI Monark.
A few other Logic synths.
Mixed in Logic Pro 9.

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post #30561 :: 2013.08.03 3:04pm
  raphaelgoulart and Slimeball liēkd this
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post #30564 :: 2013.08.03 3:10pm
  amazingfox, Xemogasa, stinkbug, sethdonut and mootbooxle liēkd this
Dat minimoog solo <3 <3 <3
Level 28 Renderist
post #30643 :: 2013.08.04 9:19am :: edit 2013.08.04 9:19am
  cce, orion, Flaminglog and mootbooxle liēkd this
I sort of want to give this all 7s, :P hehe

Maybe if there was more variation/development in general and faster development at the beginning.

Especially this glockenspiel/chiptune hook that begins around 0:45 got really repetitive throughout the song (already on the first listen). I feel that it's repeated way too much there from that point. It's almost as if it's the only playing melody, apart from the two minimoog solos. (They're certainly nice, but to me they don't add enough variation to compensate for that)

I like the accompaniment a lot though! But I feel the repetitive lead hook is sort of ruining it. ;(

(I also hope you don't mind my humble attempt at constructive criticism and there's no hard feelings :P)
Level 30 Mixist
post #30709 :: 2013.08.04 11:32pm
  amazingfox, raphaelgoulart, Xemogasa, Interrobang Pie, stinkbug, orion, Flaminglog, goluigi, Fearofdark, kfaraday and Tilde liēkd this
It's ok Slimeball. I did repeat the chorus hook a lot of times. I have a strong emotional attachment to that particular melody and just kinda went overboard with the repeats. If I had it to do over again, though, there's only one of them that I would remove. The rest I am completely satisfied with. I feel like I pretty much realised my vision for this tune.
Level 27 Chipist
post #30750 :: 2013.08.05 4:03pm
  amazingfox, raphaelgoulart, Xemogasa, Tilde, stinkbug, orion, Flaminglog, goluigi and mootbooxle liēkd this
meriting constructive criticism is an accomplishment in itself
Level 18 Chipist
post #31513 :: 2013.08.22 1:58am
  raphaelgoulart and mootbooxle liēkd this
dfghkjdfg best track of SCIII
Level 30 Mixist
post #31514 :: 2013.08.22 2:09am
  Xemogasa liēkd this
You're kind, Xemogasa. I was beginning to wonder if anyone had listened to this much!
Level 22 Chipist
post #31515 :: 2013.08.22 2:10am
  raphaelgoulart, goluigi and Xemogasa liēkd this
this wins wildchip
Level 28 Chipist
post #31725 :: 2013.08.25 12:35am
Level 18 Chipist
post #31730 :: 2013.08.25 3:02am
this reminds me of NiGHTS into Dreams actually c:
Level 24 Chipist
post #31836 :: 2013.08.27 7:17pm
  raphaelgoulart, stinkbug and mootbooxle liēkd this
moot you already know this but this is a great song and i love it

i love the influences that you bring in when you compose and nobody else really does it the way you do

[admiration hour over]

long live booxle!!!
Level 30 Mixist
post #31837 :: 2013.08.27 7:28pm
  stinkbug and commandycan liēkd this
Wow, thanks Commandycan!
Level 22 Mixist
post #31839 :: 2013.08.27 9:14pm
  Modus Ponens, Xemogasa, raphaelgoulart, commandycan, goluigi and mootbooxle liēkd this
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post #31842 :: 2013.08.28 10:12am :: edit 2013.08.28 10:13am
  Xemogasa, raphaelgoulart and mootbooxle liēkd this
MMmmMmm this is addictive. Slimeball is right about the over-repetitiveness but that is a damn nice repeated hook. Plus the overall feel of this (and this is probably mostly down to the instrumentation) is just so happy and perky... this should be a summer smash hit on the Billboard charts or something.

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