RotcivOcnarb
Level 6 Chipist
 
NES/Famicom 2a03 w/ Expansions
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solar power 
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cool breeze 
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my first chiptune, i'm new on the site, but i'm just trying to have fun
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45695
Level 10 Chipist
post #45695 :: 2014.07.07 11:48am
  
  Fantans and Slimeball liēkd this
Sounds pretty nice! But, you have same-tone constructive interference across multiple channels, leading to a bit of an unpleasant note volume in parts. This can be fixed by either checking each row to make sure you don't have two notes of the exact same tone, or by using a Pxx effect to move each tone up or down slightly, to break up the constructive interference.

I mean CAW
 
 
45697
Level 6 Chipist
post #45697 :: 2014.07.07 12:02pm
  
  Fantans, Slimeball and raphaelgoulart liēkd this
thanks for the advice xD i'm new making chips, but on the next one i'll make sure this wont happen again :)
 
 
45699
Level 10 Chipist
post #45699 :: 2014.07.07 12:46pm
  
  Slimeball liēkd this
CAW! There is still time to fix this one and resubmit it, but I look forward to hearing more from you!
 
 
45718
Level 9 Chipist
post #45718 :: 2014.07.07 9:10pm
  
  raphaelgoulart and Slimeball liēkd this
mo daora victor, mas acho q vc devia variar mais nos intruments
 
 
45734
Level 6 Chipist
post #45734 :: 2014.07.08 11:02am
  
  Fantans and raphaelgoulart liēkd this
Victinho, é vc?
 
 
45747
Level 9 Chipist
post #45747 :: 2014.07.08 7:01pm
  
  raphaelgoulart liēkd this
Ah, já que todo mundo sabe né, sou eu sim
 
 
47115
Level 11 Criticist
post #47115 :: 2014.08.16 1:43am
  
  Savestate liēkd this
This is a nice first attempt, in my opinion. I think the overall musical composition is pretty good. The one thing that could be improved is the instrumentation. You have, as WhiteCrow said, the same notes playing on multiple pulse channels playing at once producing an odd, and, usually not, a very pleasant effect.

Another thing that needs to be looked at is the volume balancing and the monotony in the instruments. Having instruments using the same duty cycle and volume will get straining on the listener's ears rather quickly. I suggest looking at other people's modules, experiment and make some covers of songs you like to get the jist of how to do it in a "good" way.

Hopefully we'll see more of you in the future. :)
 
 

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