Zero
Level 21 Chipist
 
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Shimmering Plains
 
  26th/150   Σ26.828   May 11th 2014 1:39pm
 
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I no longer saw a good reason to live safely. Maybe I was disenfranchised and could not understand the promise of living a life of uniform investments and returns, or perhaps my anxiety was justified and there truly are no more frontiers left for us in these lands.

I know the nature of so many problems, and all the answers to them, and every single one spells out a great self-compromise. It is disheartening to think that I am among the few to see, and it has instilled in me a great sense of loneliness which I believe may endure until the end of my days among the living.

I now roam the lands of the north. The winter snowfall and the summer torrents prevent woods from expanding, making for an abundance of grass. The high peaks to the south and the position relative to the convection cell makes for an area of powerful winds. The pristine skies and the precipice of nightfall with a full moon, along with the powerful winds, causes the grass to shimmer, as if the gusts themselves were carrying the essence of the moon.

All I have with me, now, are some tools and my serviceable health. Other people carry on, yet I feel only that the world is ending. As I toil and slowly starve, all I can think about is the adversity which others do not see, my only remaining objective to find a way to confront that adversity until my demise.

I reached the 160-pattern limit with this song.
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42612
Level 21 Chipist
post #42612 :: 2014.05.11 1:42pm
  
  gotoandplay, Fearofdark and Flaminglog liēkd this
This track will be part of my album in progress, titled "Cognition."
 
 
42613
Level 23 Pixelist
post #42613 :: 2014.05.11 2:02pm
Relaxing in a melancholy way. I love it!
 
 
42617
Level 27 Chipist
post #42617 :: 2014.05.11 2:51pm
Cracking songcraft and structure. Quite the return!
 
 
43205
Level 20 Chipist
post #43205 :: 2014.05.20 11:15pm
  
  Slimeball liēkd this
This is pretty good, especially in terms of sound design. The middle section goes in circles a bit though - after so much vi-VII-i, I was really looking forward to it going somewhere.

I'm definitely getting somewhat of a SLiVeR vibe from this, particularly the intro.
 
 
43417
Level 10 Criticist
post #43417 :: 2014.05.24 4:26pm
Wow this track i just amazing you are very good !!!
 
 
59719
Level 13 Chipist
post #59719 :: 2015.09.03 8:32pm
I really like the first 2 paragraphs to your description
 
 
61551
Level 27 Renderist
post #61551 :: 2015.12.15 3:25pm
so bump
 
 

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