peshti
Level 10 Mixist
 
funkability 
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  31st/31   Σ12.851   Dec 20th 2016 11:24am
 
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I know this isn't funk, I can't compose funk and I'm pretty new to composing, however I feel that I have to put up something. I've tried several times to compose funk but I've alwasy failed.

Take the track for a spin :).
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75252
Level 23 Chipist
post #75252 :: 2016.12.20 4:48pm
Interesting melodies and instrument choices. The main suggestion I would make is to lower the volume of the lead synth a bit and add some vibrato at certain parts to add color. Keep it up!
 
 
75256
Level 10 Mixist
post #75256 :: 2016.12.20 11:29pm
  
  th4 D34D liēkd this
Thanks for the feedback :), much appreciated. I'll think about that in my future tracks!
 
 
75393
Level 27 Renderist
post #75393 :: 2016.12.24 9:30am
  
  Jangler hæitd this
funk = swing melody :X F04/F06/F04/F06/F04/F06/etc. ;D
 
 
75412
Level 10 Mixist
post #75412 :: 2016.12.24 2:37pm
haha b00daw easy to say ;), maybe I'll be able to funk it up when I've got more experience ;).
 
 
75970
Level 27 Chipist
post #75970 :: 2017.01.02 7:57am
  
  Zillah and shinichi liēkd this
if you know it isn't funk, why enter it to a funk compo? ;( you'll have plenty of other opportunities to make & share tunes.
 
 
76038
Level 10 Mixist
post #76038 :: 2017.01.03 3:32am
Jangler because I have other projects that I think are better and this might give me feedback :).
 
 
76091
Level 24 Chipist
post #76091 :: 2017.01.03 7:44pm
First tip- no long pads. The funk lies in the spaces between short notes and the counterpoint of their rhythms.
 
 
76104
Level 10 Mixist
post #76104 :: 2017.01.04 4:12am
chunter good tip :)!
 
 
76407
Level 27 Chipist
post #76407 :: 2017.01.08 6:45am
melodies cld use some more shape. have u tried cutting them off before the next one? :-]
 
 
76493
Level 10 Mixist
post #76493 :: 2017.01.09 4:07am
charlotte good input :), no I haven't I'll think about that next time!
 
 

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