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Iruka
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NES/Famicom 2a03 w/ Expansions
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solar power 
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naked power 
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cool breeze 
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Energy Drinks (NES)
 
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47161
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post #47161 :: 2014.08.17 8:24am
Hmm..... There a few things you need to work on.

Instrumentation is definitely up there. The instruments are very loud and not properly balanced with each other. There is also a lack of variation in the sound. Vibratos, duty cycles, arpeggios and volume variance will definitely help.

Composition wise it is very repetetive.

To get a better idea of how to proceed, I suggest that you should look at other people's modules and trying to imitate what they are doing. Making covers is also a good way to hone your music creation skills.

Don't be discouraged. Keep going and you will be fine. :)
 
 

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