Minerscale
Level 14 Mixist
 
Sega Genesis/MegaDrive
6th/12

 
cool breeze 
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face melt 
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hawt night 
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sweaty morning 
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sun burnt pants 
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soz boz
 
  74th/166   Σ22.753   Jul 29th 2017 3:58pm
 
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Yay! It's my 50th entry! And for my 50th entry I've made something I actually like (woo!) And I hope you like it too.
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88569
Level 25 Chipist
post #88569 :: 2017.07.29 4:06pm
i actually like it too, i think its your best so far
 
 
88578
Level 18 Pixelist
post #88578 :: 2017.07.30 3:40am
Definitely feels like an improvement and deserves a like. Good leads :)
 
 
88595
Level 25 Chipist
post #88595 :: 2017.07.30 2:06pm :: edit 2017.07.30 2:07pm
this is pretty good! reminds me of a good ending themes in general
my only two complaints is that i dont really like how it stays on one and only one chord progression for the entirety of the song, feels a tad bit repetitive imo
and at 1:19 ~ 1:26 those Eb notes felt a bit out of place imo, specially since the square on the background is using the E note ocasionally (on its C G E C G E sequence), so they kinda sound slightly... dissonant, i think that's the word. a bit like making a melody in a minor scale for a song in a major scale
but once again this is good, just pointing out the details i didnt really like so you can further improve on your next compositions, but you're in the right path imo so good job!
 
 
88616
Level 14 Mixist
post #88616 :: 2017.07.31 12:17am
Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'll think about those for my next compositions. I think the repetitiveness of a song is really the killer for what I make and I need to stop doing that.
 
 
88704
Level 22 Chipist
post #88704 :: 2017.08.03 5:03am
  
  Jangler, RazerBlue6 and pigdevil2010 liēkd this
when you buy a sega genesis game but its a port of kings quest
 
 
88725
Level 21 Chipist
post #88725 :: 2017.08.03 11:35am
  
  Jangler liēkd this
Great job miner! Very cute and chilled back vibe. You can definitely benefit from melodic and key changes, but I think this piece is good as is. The repetitiveness seems appropriate for that main bell melody IMO. Once again, good work and looking forward to your future tracks!
 
 
88784
Level 14 Mixist
post #88784 :: 2017.08.04 12:05am
aww thanks. <3
 
 

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