peshti
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sketch 6 v4
 
  32nd/43   Σ17.714   Jun 3rd 2018 3:19am
 
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A song I created starting with a sketch, using fl studio, fm drive and super audio cart :). The song needs some revision work but I know I won't have time to finish it before this ends since I am taking an online course for cinematic music that I am fully focused on. However this is probably my most finished song.

Take the track for a spin and keep an eye out because more is definitely coming and I am starting to reach the point where I am starting to see the results of my hard work.

However this is supposed to be a sega chiptune, I have figured out better ways to emulate that sega sound but you will notice that in my future tracks :)!

Give me some feedback and criticism!

Thanks

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100546
Level 11 Chipist
post #100546 :: 2018.06.03 7:19am
  
  NNOIZZ liēkd this
Imo, the drums could be warmer, so the song could be clearer. But other than that, you're getting the hang of the Sega chiptune. Keep it going. đź‘Ť
 
 
100638
Level 9 Mixist
post #100638 :: 2018.06.07 4:19pm
Thanks for the feedback man :), I will keep that in mind!
 
 
100936
Level 9 Mixist
post #100936 :: 2018.06.17 1:06pm
  
  RigidatoMS liēkd this
Same as RigidatoMS. It sounds awesome regardless.
 
 
100978
Level 9 Mixist
post #100978 :: 2018.06.18 7:53am
Thanks for the feedback :). Glad to hear that it sounds awesome!
 
 
101393
Level 23 Chipist
post #101393 :: 2018.07.01 6:16am
Drums are a bit repetitive, with kick on every beat. I think you should work on mixing, as a lot seems drowned out.
 
 
101414
Level 9 Mixist
post #101414 :: 2018.07.01 1:51pm
Thanks for the feedback Robyn :), I have already worked on mixing or well I have learned to keep it simple in the future for the chiptune :). You will notice that ^^.

Appreacite your time and thanks for listening!
 
 

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