ElliottB1
Level 5 Mixist
 
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open house by the bay
 
  186th/199   Σ18.027   Mar 29th 2018 11:53am
 
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This was """quickly""" slapped together over the course of around an hour, though I imagine other BotBrs do the same.
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98209
Level 20 Mixist
post #98209 :: 2018.04.02 6:58pm
i like how the melody sounds with the overtones3 thing, and the sound that you got for the snare/clap
 
 
98213
Level 15 Chipist
post #98213 :: 2018.04.02 8:41pm
  
  Galgox liēkd this
there's so much potential in this track bro. i think this can be fully realized if time is spent in it.
 
 
99327
Level 23 Chipist
post #99327 :: 2018.05.09 11:44am
IDK but some sort of dyslexia made me read the title as "open house baby!" (spelled bay bay lol)

Nice stuff for a little hour jam, got some nice chill sounds going on. The melodic elements could use a bit more imo, just seems a bit sparse now from a composition stand point. Would love to hear what you can do when you spend a few days or weeks on a track!
 
 
99337
Level 6 Mixist
post #99337 :: 2018.05.09 12:25pm
Like others have said, I agree this track lacks some polish and depth, but it has potential! Just keep going and make more stuff, I guess :D
 
 
99917
Level 10 Chipist
post #99917 :: 2018.05.16 3:57pm
  
  ElliottB1 liēkd this
 
 
100059
Level 20 Pixelist
post #100059 :: 2018.05.19 12:49pm :: edit 2018.05.19 12:50pm
It definitely needs to be more full to shine
More instrument parts playing at once would do the trick, some complex arpeggios in the background, etc
 
 

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