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WILDCHIPNESS: every instrument except the bass and drums are FM synthesis

please do not to be minding the poopy bass playing , ive only been playing for 3 weeks !!!!!!
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Level 23 Chipist
post #88926 :: 2017.08.07 12:59pm
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Coool rel instramints! Nice work kin, dat bass sounds dirty. You have a really nice ethereal sound. The sounds and melodies are awesome, and your playing is good for the time you've been playing. However, your timing is a bit off, and this track could greatly benefit from having the bass performance be tighter. Also the drum patterns are bit over saturated IMO, I think less crash-cymbal (maybe put it every other bar, or every 4 bars, instead of every bar), and the tom fill comes at a slightly odd time (usually fills flesh out the end of a measure). And of course the abrupt ending seemed kind of out of place.

You really nailed a great sound though, and I think that if you address some of these little issues, this (and your future tracks) will be stellar! You have an awesome shoegazer vibe/sound, and I think this could be cool with a vocalist as well. Great work kin.
Level 17 Chipist
post #89136 :: 2017.08.13 6:50pm
I love this, thank You
Level 22 Pixelist
post #89160 :: 2017.08.14 8:14am
This has kinda 90s alternative/indie rock vibe to it, really nice. Pls fix the ending though ;-;
Level 12 Criticist
post #90256 :: 2017.09.09 6:16am
Really needs some timing adjusting on the instruments, sounds like my music teacher who couldn't keep tempo...
Level 16 Mixist
post #98675 :: 2018.04.24 6:08pm redid bass quickly, one take after about half an hour of repractice.

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