mind hosting the better version somewhere so we can hear? i'm curious. this version sounds pretty nice to me. did you accidentally turn it up too loud and clip the mix? that's what it sounds like may have happened.
Well thank you maxvdub. Sorry That I did not react, I was not at my Comp almost two weeks. I do not know that i fully understand what you write :) ...don't speak English ...but, Here is my first version "functical" https://soundcloud.com/mios153/funktical