argarak
Level 21 Chipist
 
Sega Master System
7th/10

 
cool breeze 
135th Σ4.424

 
face melt 
159th Σ4.152

 
hawt night 
118th Σ4.478

 
sweaty morning 
136th Σ4.340

 
sun in pants 
145th Σ4.125

 
cityscape at night
 
  147th/230   Σ21.518   Jun 28th 2019 1:25pm
 
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walking around as day turns into night

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112204
Level 15 Chipist
post #112204 :: 2019.06.28 2:35pm
I loved the intro!
The song also seems slightly unfocused, without a coherent theme, but I shouldn't criticize because no tunes suck more than mine.
 
 
112231
Level 21 Chipist
post #112231 :: 2019.06.28 3:56pm
  
  Spring liēkd this
I appreciate criticism, and I think it's fair - the song is a bit incoherent which was kinda my attempt to add more variety to the song, it's still something I gotta work on!
 
 
113612
Level 23 Chipist
post #113612 :: 2019.08.21 7:04pm
  
  argarak liēkd this
Pretty hard to keep SMS interesting but I think the variations might be reading as a bit messy in areas because of the sound limitations. I definitely see where you were going, but I think they would have translated better with hi-q sounds. The picture I think you are painting in your mind doesn't seem to be communicating what you are thinking it is. Some of the sections seem to drag a bit, which I think is also a limitation of the sound canvas, it just makes your subtle variations get kind of lost. But as for the parts themselves, you have some absolutely classic sounding melodies, and really nice percussive beats.
 
 

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