I sort of want to give this all 7s, but.....no. :P hehe
Maybe if there was more variation/development in general and faster development at the beginning.
Especially this glockenspiel/chiptune hook that begins around 0:45 got really repetitive throughout the song (already on the first listen). I feel that it's repeated way too much there from that point. It's almost as if it's the only playing melody, apart from the two minimoog solos. (They're certainly nice, but to me they don't add enough variation to compensate for that)
I like the accompaniment a lot though! But I feel the repetitive lead hook is sort of ruining it. ;(
(I also hope you don't mind my humble attempt at constructive criticism and there's no hard feelings :P)