Doxic
Level 21 Chipist
 
classic DOS module
11th/30

 
springiness 
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flower power 
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eval() 
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fever 
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spring in pants 
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The War and The Tossed Salad
 
  26th/106   Σ26.810   May 19th 2013 12:18am
 
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Hello,
This song is a musical depiction of a soldier who has just been terminally wounded and is about to die. His brain can't process what has happened to him just yet, and because of that he goes into a dream-like trance, a world where everything is perfect and he has everything he ever wanted. He enjoys it at first, and is blissfully unaware of his tragic fate, but he soon starts to feel uneasy. He begins to see the world darken and warp around him. Nothing seems right anymore, and as he starts to look for an escape from this mind game, he begins to weaken, he starts to feel dizzy and eventually collapses on the ground. In that moment he snaps back into reality, fully realizing his fate.
His hands tremble as he clutches the bleeding wound in his chest, everything is beginning to darken and chill. But he is not scared, nor is he sad or angry at his fate. Rather he is content with how he lived his life, how he served his country and died for it. There is no darkness in his eyes now, everything has turned to light as his life flashes before his eyes and with a strained whisper he breathes, "Peace."
Content to leave his earthly life behind he gives up the ghost, and ascends into heaven.

MilkyTracker, with samples from various OHC's and other entries. Enjoy~
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27667
Level 21 Chipist
post #27667 :: 2013.05.18 1:30pm
  
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192k MP3 Render HERE! :)) http://puu.sh/2W8xk.mp3
 
 
27669
Level 22 Chipist
post #27669 :: 2013.05.18 2:45pm
  
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Sad.
 
 
27685
Level 21 Chipist
post #27685 :: 2013.05.19 12:19am :: edit 2013.05.19 12:22am
  
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Edited the Crash sample due to having a left pan on it for some reason. Re-upping MP3, and I will redo my other render later.

Edit: Also I don't think my mp3 render turned out to be the same... I will come back to that tomorrow
 
 
27687
Level 29 Chipist
post #27687 :: 2013.05.19 4:19am
  
  Fearofdark, Interrobang Pie, Slimeball and Doxic liēkd this
wowww this one might be my favourite right now

an xm symphonic poem!!!
 
 
27735
Level 21 Chipist
post #27735 :: 2013.05.20 12:12am
Ok, sorry for the third bump. But I remixed the MP3 render and it should be all good now! I will shortly readd the higher quality mp3 as well. Again, sorry for the trouble with this entry. I should have been more tentative to things like this when I was working on it~
 
 
27739
Level 27 Renderist
post #27739 :: 2013.05.20 12:49am
  
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I do wonder what kind of tossed salad you actually mean. ;3
 
 
27740
Level 21 Chipist
post #27740 :: 2013.05.20 1:09am
  
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That was one thing I forgot to mention. The title is a shortened description in a way. On the one hand, you have reality. Life, death, and everything in-between. (The War) On the other hand, you have a fantasy world that some people cling to. Where everything is perfect and just as we want. An illusion of life, which when compared to the harsh reality of The War, appears as utter nonsense and doesn't seem to fit in whatsoever.

Hope that makes sense ~_~
 
 
27743
Level 28 Chipist
post #27743 :: 2013.05.20 5:14am
  
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i will never understand any of what you're saying but cool song
 
 
27744
Level 21 Chipist
post #27744 :: 2013.05.20 5:45am
  
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give up already
 
 
27758
Level 24 Mixist
post #27758 :: 2013.05.20 1:22pm
  
  Modus Ponens, Interrobang Pie, Jangler, Doxic, TQ-Jam, kfaraday, goluigi and Slimeball liēkd this
hey never give up

stand up for what is right
raise a voice and let it be heard
tell the president
 
 
27759
Level 19 Mixist
post #27759 :: 2013.05.20 1:57pm
  
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"Never Give Up" - Bark Obama, 2011
 
 
27769
Level 28 Chipist
post #27769 :: 2013.05.21 5:32am
the story of this song kinda sounds like slaughterhouse five

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Slaughterhouse-Five
 
 
27772
Level 21 Chipist
post #27772 :: 2013.05.21 10:28am
Maybe a little similar? I'm not sure, the summary on wikipedia doesn't really sound the same, but I've never read it so I don't really know. If you need to relate it to something else, this is kind of similar to the ending of "Star Trek: Generations"
 
 
28497
Level 24 Chipist
post #28497 :: 2013.06.07 6:34pm
  
  Slimeball and Doxic liēkd this
<3 h e a r t s <3
 
 
28521
Level 27 chipist
post #28521 :: 2013.06.08 3:09am
  
  zebra and Doxic liēkd this
flomp approved Full marks
 
 
28635
Level 21 Chipist
post #28635 :: 2013.06.11 8:07am
  
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you didn't give up

im happy with this
 
 
28924
Level 25 Chipist
post #28924 :: 2013.06.22 6:28am :: edit 2013.06.22 6:38am
  
  zebra and Doxic liēkd this
:') *clap clap clap*

Beautiful and moving, yet tragic and heart-breaking at the same time. This piece is great even standing alone, but when coupled with the description, this is made even better. Even though the production could be better at points, you still get perfect 7's from me :)
 
 
28931
Level 21 Chipist
post #28931 :: 2013.06.22 1:30pm
  
  zebra and Slimeball liēkd this
Thanks FoD, your comment means a lot to me :)

I agree that my production skills are lacking, I struggled trying to get it just the way it is now haha.
Hopefully on future tracks it will be better :)
Thank you again man
 
 
29047
Level 23 Chipist
post #29047 :: 2013.06.25 5:22pm
  
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"Landmine has taken my sight..." etc

This is well done, I think you'll get the hang of how to keep the highs in your mix later.
 
 

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