petet
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allgear
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The Philtre of Life
 
  1st/43   Σ29.304   Jun 16th 2018 11:22pm
 
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2a03 + vrc6

0:00 - in the tallest tower of an abandoned keep...

0:05 - the baron, an alchemist of some renown, toils away on a potion that, if successful, will extend his lifespan by decades.

0:50 - drawn back to a time where dcpm and expansion chips were unheard of, the baron recalls his youth, and his earliest experiments in alchemy (and video games)

1:20 - the essence of youth, extracted from these memories, causes the potion to bubble vigorously for a moment.

1:32 - the baron recalls his years as a young adult. young aristocrats are required to learn ballroom dancing.

1:57 - a duet of sorts! perhaps a dance shared with someone special?

2:13 - back to the task at hand. the potion smells slightly of spring flowers, once the essence of love is extracted and mixed in

2:54 - vivid memories of a decade-long war, of the baron's own devising. many have fought valiantly on the fields of battle.

3:33 - the essence of strength, extracted from memories of friendly competition, completes the potion. exhausted, the baron retires to his chambers. will the philtre work as intended?


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100916
Level 21 Taggist
post #100916 :: 2018.06.17 4:04am
  
  petet liēkd this
looks like i have a new favorite allgear entry in this major now!
 
 
100948
Level 14 Chipist
ipi
post #100948 :: 2018.06.17 3:07pm
  
  kleeder and petet liēkd this
Great work! The music captures the story perfectly!
 
 
100949
Level 23 Mixist
post #100949 :: 2018.06.17 3:15pm
  
  petet liēkd this
fantastic composition!
 
 
100966
Level 9 Mixist
post #100966 :: 2018.06.17 7:29pm :: edit 2018.06.17 7:29pm
  
  kleeder and petet liēkd this
OH. Magicful, lovely!

Also, the description adds a lot to the mix.
 
 
101281
Level 26 Chipist
post #101281 :: 2018.06.27 12:10pm
  
  petet liēkd this
spectacular
 
 
101403
Level 15 Chipist
post #101403 :: 2018.07.01 10:58am
  
  petet liēkd this
Wow, a cliffhanger. I wish to know what happens next with the baron and the philtre.
 
 
101426
Level 21 Taggist
post #101426 :: 2018.07.01 4:40pm
  
  petet liēkd this
well-deserved first place man, congratz!

(i was wondering, could you upload the nsf and/or tracker-file somewhere?)
 
 
101444
Level 22 Mixist
post #101444 :: 2018.07.01 7:10pm
  
  Flaminglog, VirtualMan, kleeder and Karmic liēkd this
 
 
101539
Level 8 Criticist
post #101539 :: 2018.07.04 12:00pm
  
  petet liēkd this
Oh. OH. Holy crap.
 
 

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