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The Neo-Yukarilien Arrives from the Future!! (ch1+2+3+4+5)
  4th/35   Σ25.660   Oct 20th 2018 4:04pm
this is a wip, i will be adding onto it


it is 495 years after chen yakumo built the space rocket into EIENTEI and defeated the lunatic drug psychiatrist, she is home sleeping right now. little does she know an ALIEN is awakening...

0:00-0:26: yukari yakumo (chen's granssexual ma) has been sleeping for -4000 years (that's 10000 years, but 14000 years in the future), where she has been holidaying. sadly, time has been speeding up and it is now so fast that it is intersecting with her dimension!!

0:27-0:30 yukari's "EVIL MOTIF" (two tritones)

0:30-0:56 yukari is awake now and she is very upset and also groggy, so she is causing LOTS of chaos in the normal people's world at random, which is not very good... (this is the "HAVOC MOTIF")

0:59-1:04 another EVIL motif, associated with the "microtones" 22, 26, 24 and 25. pay attention to this one later

CHAPTER 2: THE HEROINE FROM LAST TIME, CHEN YAKUMO is also sleeping (this time in a dog house)

1:12-1:26 a towns person, LINDA from "hippa linda" has come to find chen, because her grandmother is going crazy. the "CHEN" motif from the song "chen goes to eientei" is here. she is calling it out because she dunno where she is... she is asking for help as well, and that the world is in trouble...

1:26-1:40 chen (the groggy 50% square) awakes, very groggily, with an "evil tritone" in the background, as yukari is tearing things up in the background. linda (the perky 12.5% square) is appealing to her to help fight the bad guy... "come on... aren't you the GREAT HERO?" she says a lot, while telling her of the mess yukari is making. "come on...!"

1:40-1:51 "awh.. this again?? i already fought too hard last time. (the TREIPDATION MOTIF from 'chen goes to eientei' can be heard briefly here, as her and linda get into a nagging argument). isn't reimu free?" "reimu has a paywall!!!" "alice...?" "i'm not going near THAT freak!!!" ... linda eventually yanks her out of the dog house with three GREAT tugs, as they see what is going on...

1:52++ the world has gotten very strange due to yukari tearing up the place. there are a lot of microtones and pitch bends... what to heck is going to happen??? i dunno yet. i'll let you know though...


2:00 it is five minutes (in universe time) after chen has decided to stop yukari in a sleep and sex drug induced haze. luckily, the drama has not takken long to heat up as yukari has already eaten 93% of anime world, and chen and linda r thrust deep into her giant belly. her belly somewhat resembles a BLACK HOLE, as the microtones evil motif and chen's motif r thrust through microtonal BLACK HOLE DILATION into

2:13 this is the BELLY motif, which is just semitones like the microtones evil motif

2:22 a hell version of the HAVOC motif that sounds like a kirby song appears. ahh...! there are several layers of hell, each for different sorts of people stuck in her belly...

2:30 oh hold on. there is a weird plug over here. chen gives it a YANK... and...

2:32 aaaah!!! that wasnt good. now the events are playing backwards. it would be nice if this let you escape...

2:45 aah! now yukari's voice is crying out. she didnt like that...

2:48 the REVERSAL process finishes, and the section reverts to back where it began, falling back into the maw womb again. well, that wasnt ideal. now she knows where you are...!!!


2:54 the belly motif happens more rumbling now... and sinister.

3:01 aaaah! ok there she is. you can tell she is here because she is firing danmaku at you very heavily. the soundtrack has a more touhou song now, and the havoc motif has become more ACROBATIC...

3:40 aaack!!! she is really strong. after three strong hits chen is down for the count. linda is calling chen's motif very loud from a back alley behind a disused stomach cavity, and chen is weakly and exhaustedly mocking it in response

3:48 "hahahahh!!! that was good. im gonna eat some more shit now. im going to eat my OWN HOUSE because i am really hungry", yukari yells from inside her own stomach

wait... no... my house... thats where i sleep!!! you can destroy the world if you want, but you are not destroying my house. i've had it...!!!!


4:00 chen is becoming energised with strong MAHOU SHOJO energies and begins firing danmaku at over 20 notes per second (stepmania hard difficulty). her energy is randomly flagging...

4:14 she is getting very worn out doing this!! (she is only a two star fighter after all, compared to yukari's seven)... she falls down... but luckily yukaris digestive system had a ONE UP mushroom stuck in it (from eating mario world) and this renewed her energy, while also giving her PEGASUS wings

4:30 some more danmaku nonsense (havoc and tritone evil theme here)

4:54 oh woah hold on. there is ANOTHER plug that lets u WARP back in time (this sounds good) it is at the end of a long tunnel and chen has to become veyr DETERMINED (videogame reference) to reach this switch...

5:03 aaaaahHHHHH!!! yes. she hits it just in time! yukari could have pribably stopped this really easily, but she has no idea what she eats. only a true OBSERVANT mind could have correlated her contents...

5:07 time has reset... everyone is saved! ahhh! hmm... but we still remember what is going on. yukari is very pissed off now. you might need to actually fight her thi s time

5:11+++ IDIOT TUSSLE BEGIN (i will finish this!!!! only two more to go)


this is a SERIAL(ist) manga, so i am going to be updating it throughout the contest. maybe weekly. make sure to check back!!!
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there might be seven chapters. in any case, this isnt finished yet!
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post #104145 :: 2018.10.01 4:06pm :: edit 2018.10.08 4:23pm
  YQN liēkd this
that's a lot of text for such short sections. i tried to read along while i listened but the piece was over before i could finish @_@

lmao @ " i'll update this later, since max needs time to read!!! "
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post #104435 :: 2018.10.13 7:11pm
You might be insane, and I think I might like it.
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post #104653 :: 2018.10.21 11:30am
  petet and wulfy liēkd this
rrrrr lol i pooped out too hard to finish this... i will have them finished soon!!! mb they will go on soundcloud
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  kleeder liēkd this
still havent finished this (laugh
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post #120724 :: 2020.05.14 10:47am
  charlotte liēkd this
the fact you didnt finish this isnt as bad as the fact that you didnt close the damn brackets (laughs, but syntactically correct)

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