DaJoshy
Level 12 Chipist
 
NES/Famicom 2a03 w/ Expansions
19th/26

 
cool breeze 
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face melt 
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hawt night 
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sweaty morning 
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sun burnt pants 
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The Last One
 
  110th/166   Σ20.996   Jul 30th 2017 11:50pm
 
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I didn't want to waste too much time thinking of a title. So, this is what you get. I'd greatly appreciate if you guys could give me some sort of criticism on this song. I want my final NSF entry to be the best one I've ever submitted. So, if there's something you don't like about the song or something you want me to add, please let me know and I'll reupload the song with those problems fixed.

Also, it's a VRC6 tune. But you could probably figure that out on your own.
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88618
Level 18 Pixelist
post #88618 :: 2017.07.31 4:55am :: edit 2017.07.31 5:06am
  
  DaJoshy and Quirby64 liēkd this
This really stands out (in a good way) compared to every single entry you have submitted earlier, and I'm not even trying to avoid being harsh with my opinions just to comfort you. This one kept me interested until the very end, and feels much more thought out structure-wise. Same goes for the leads, they actually -uhm- LEAD somewhere and aren't chaotic.
I don't know how much effort it does take, and how psychically exhausting it is to compose for you, but if you're going to keep progressing at current rate, i'd rather advise you against quitting BotB for good. Maybe just make something twice a year or so, rather than pushing yourself too hard and musically shitpost when you don't really feel like (except OHBs maybe, they are good for your musical health)
 
 
88810
Level 21 Chipist
post #88810 :: 2017.08.04 10:43am
  
  DaJoshy, Quirby64 and Jangler liēkd this
This is an epic sounding tune mang. Nice melodic progression throughout, and the breakdown with the noise wind/waves gave a real cinematic feel to it. I really like the variation between call and response and homophonic texturing. I like more variation in percussion personally, but the driving beat seems like a fitting stylistic choice for this track so it's really just preference.
 
 
90060
Level 22 Chipist
post #90060 :: 2017.09.03 9:22pm :: edit 2017.09.03 9:23pm
  
  DaJoshy liēkd this
Overall, it's good. My only complaint is that you used the pure saw bass which can easily hurt ears at low frequencies.
 
 

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