malmen
Level 23 Mixist
 
allgear
3rd/51

 
organic produce 
10th Σ5.872

 
razor leaf 
16th Σ5.661

 
earthshaking 
3rd Σ6.076

 
cool pastures 
17th Σ5.834

 
wood in pants 
11th Σ5.651

 
Teardown
 
  5th/216   Σ29.094   May 6th 2015 1:16am
 
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abandon, dissolve, retreat, withdraw, escape, die out, fade, depart
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56840
Level 19 Chipist
post #56840 :: 2015.05.06 2:20pm
Very cool.
 
 
56847
Level 24 Mixist
post #56847 :: 2015.05.06 2:47pm :: edit 2015.05.06 3:02pm
  
  raphaelgoulart and Oudaaarns liēkd this
Oh wow, this track changed a lot since the early previews! Great stuff for sure, though my pipedreaming self would love to see an extended version with the full vocal bits in. BUt now I'm being a silly nitpicker. :P

[EDIT] The lead maybe repeats a bit too much. Still has that problem where the second half of the track is basically identical to the first. Personal preference probably, but it's missing a big chord-change-y bridge/breakdown bit.
 
 
56848
Level 26 Chipist
post #56848 :: 2015.05.06 3:52pm :: edit 2015.05.06 3:56pm
holy wow malmen this is amazing
i do agree with xaser's edit tho
 
 
57000
Level 26 Chipist
post #57000 :: 2015.05.10 2:43pm
oh btw, where are these voice samples from? or did you make them yourself somehow? ty :D
 
 
57210
Level 13 Mixist
post #57210 :: 2015.05.16 11:05pm
... ... wow
 
 
57220
Level 25 Chipist
post #57220 :: 2015.05.17 9:22am
  
  raphaelgoulart liēkd this
Good! Agree with Xaser's criticism tho; some variation in progression, melody would make this track even "gooder"
 
 
68015
Level 5 Criticist
post #68015 :: 2016.05.22 7:01pm
this is pretty damn good. you need to do more like this. promote it on some youtube channels or something
 
 
89224
Level 17 Chipist
post #89224 :: 2017.08.15 9:44pm
I just listened to this again today while working. It's very cool!
 
 

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