An interesting idea. The repetitive composition kinda works given the context of the song, and it has that pitched noise loop and the driving rhythm to keep things going.
While the composition is mostly fine imo, my biggest criticism would be that overall the entry sounds a bit 'too' plain with regards to the melody and overall sound design - could change up the lead instrument in some sections and add some vibrato to the long notes. Introducing more adventurous moments in this, adding more elements or developing the looping percussion or chords further as the piece goes on would've been a cool way to take this.
Overall there's room for improvement but I like the concept and composition quite a bit.