Catchy harmonies and leads all along, I absolutely love the powerful individuality of each track, that reinforces the coherence of the whole.
Also, 3:29 <3 <3
However, I strongly agree with Plrusek: Famitracker's limited instrumentation feels like it's always holding you. The chords and melody's texture feels very samey and I am convinced that changing the instrumentation would benefit your pieces enormously!
I'm voting this very high because the composition really deserves it nonetheless.
I believe you would do a great job composing for a string quartet