ohh man so much wow. I really like your percussive elements, that snare is phat. Your arps and meldies were really nice, although I like a bit more vibrato on teh leads you may notice lol, but that's just personal taste. Excellent progressions, and great sounds! You are a famimaster in just one track! :D
Actually just wanna echo how good this is after listening to it again. First section or so kind of reminds me of Neil Baldwin's style with the phase changing arps, and the melody in the later sections remind me of Kirby (and the square bass + tri lead combo too).
And pulling all this off in your first NSF tune? Dang.