kleeder
Level 12 Chipist
 
classic DOS module
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equinox 
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flowers in pants 
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Chartreuse Reprise
 
  175th/199   Σ18.785   Mar 30th 2018 3:18am
 
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27970
 
Chartreuse (color), a yellow-green color named after the liqueur
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99286
Level 6 Playa
post #99286 :: 2018.05.08 11:46pm
  
  kleeder liēkd this
This one grows on you. If anyone doesn't believe me, listen to it all the way through. The ending trick is clever, too.
 
 
99339
Level 6 Mixist
post #99339 :: 2018.05.09 12:39pm
  
  kleeder liēkd this
I like the sounds and the melody/progressions. The whole track through I was hoping for a solid beat to kick in though :D The end is indeed pretty cool.
 
 
99351
Level 23 Chipist
post #99351 :: 2018.05.09 1:58pm
  
  kleeder liēkd this
Man I am still getting through all your entries for this compo! Doing all these formats is a great way to build your overall experience and confidence with tracking. This one came out pretty cool! Overall nice production, all your sound choices are good and melodies sound interesting. However it seems to be missing a well defined snare element in your rhythm section. This might just be a stylistic choice, but personally I would like to hear a stronger snare element come in at some point.
 
 
99443
Level 0 n00b
post #99443 :: 2018.05.10 8:40am
  
  Slimeball and kleeder liēkd this
you should change the volume and key more, when it's always the same volume and key for too long it gets tiring
 
 
99892
Level 9 Chipist
post #99892 :: 2018.05.16 3:38pm
This doesn't sound yellow-green
 
 

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