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A Bag of Potato Chips and a Can of Solo
 
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Solo is a Norwegian soda, and it's freakin' delicious!!
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38252
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post #38252 :: 2014.02.24 9:21pm
Let the bass cut sometimes with the arps and it will get a rhythmic push, think "Higher Ground."
 
 
38606
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post #38606 :: 2014.02.27 12:24pm
melody could use additional articulation, variation, volume control imo
 
 
38735
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post #38735 :: 2014.02.28 4:33pm
Agreed with all of the above, I will also add that the drums could use a fill or two.

That being said, this is a pleasant entry. That first lead instrument you use, with the quivering vibrato has an oddly strange charm I can't quite put my finger on, but it's making me grin.
 
 

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